Because You Don’t See Me

Its Like a slash in my flesh
A searing in my body
A breaking in my heart
A tearing in my soul…

I look at you all day long
But I never seem to get enough
And now I’m always hearing that song
Of my heart’s beating so rough

Every time I see you
I feel fireworks explodin’
I’m so hooked on all you do
You got my heart’s love pumpin’

Right next to you
Is where I wanna be forever
Hoping only for my wish to come true
Cause you see I got this ragin’ fever

You’re drivin’ me all crazy
Yo! I’m goin’ mad here!
You got my insides feelin’ hazy
And the worse is you don’t care!

You’re are the centre of my world
Just like the sun is to the earth
But the difference is me you’ve hurled
Into a delirious need for the you so dearth

“Look At Me” Im Screamin’ !
Just take a freaking look at me
I may be the ugly ducklin’
As far as you may see

But why don’t you look closer?
Take a look at my soul for a change
Why don’t you dig a little deeper?
I’m not that out of your range!

I see you and its like-
I been smokin’ weed my ‘ole life
And I know; If I had a mike
I’d scream out my love and leave out the strife

If you could look at me
If only you’d not look through
If only you could set me free
Of this obsession for you

When you walk in the room
Its like if there was only you
You’re like the air due to who
Flowers In spring bloom

I was told to not fall in love
I tried hard to you know?
But then somehow I was looking above
And I fell in what seemed a red carpet of snow

And you see now I can’t get out
Or maybe its cause I don’t want to
Maybe it’s because the meaning of my life is about
You and only you

Can butterflies live without plants?
Can those plants live without oxygen?
Can anteaters live without ants?
Could water exist without hydrogen?

If yes than I’ll forget you
But you see, the answer is no
You’re encrusted in me too
And barely do I manage to not let it show

I was told that if I fell
In that muddy pool of red
My eyes could form a well
‘Cause tears wouldn’t stop being shed

Guess they were right
‘Cause you see I’m bathing
In lukewarm liquid alright
And I just can’t stop paining

I looked for my heart’s soul mate
And unfortunately I found it
‘Cause now I see it’s too late
‘Cause you already found that other bit

Or so It seems;
And I’ve passed in second plan
Where reality only exists in dreams
Where happiness is banned

Doctors say that blisters heal
But it’s not true, it’s not real

‘Cause my heart is breaking to bit
And you’re the only one who can mend it

I don’t feel it healing
I only feel it tearing

I’m the dying ant, with a heavy load
Agonizing on the cold wet road

And you’re the passer-by
Who doesn’t even hear my cry

You see me everyday
But you’re not really looking
You talk to me today
But you’re not really talking

I might as well be the atom In the air
That you breathe in; but don’t see
‘Cause in the end you really don’t care
About who I am, about me

You walk by and you don’t
Even look my way
You walk by and you wont
Even think to say-

Anything.

I could be also dead
You wouldn’t even notice
I could be lying on my death bed
But you’d be with her feeling bliss

Thank God I didn’t hope
Maybe ‘cause I knew it was hopeless
And I was right since now I’ve got to cope
With this pain, so utterly endless

I knew I had to stay away
But something about you made me stay

And now I’m the only one
Suffering; for hoping that you’d one day be mine…

Deffinitly one of the best angsty "he loves me not" poems i've ever had the pleasure of reading XD

On a more serious note, I loved the way you phrased things, bring a rich imagry to it and a deffitly fresh veiw to the whole - "i'm invisible, he doesn't love me'' poetry type. It drew me in, made my own heart ache, which is unusual for these types of poems (I normally read it with an 'are you kidding me?' expression and wincing at the over use of mega-cliches). Deffinitly worth reading and i'm tempted to ask if you'd mind me putting it up on my wall in my room (I'm a poetry lover and my walls tend to get covered in them... or the ones I love anyways).

If there was a problem with your flow or grammar or spelling I didn't find it (which admitably isn't saying much, since I SUCK at grammar and spelling and well i couldn't actually WRITE poetry to save my life, so don't quote me on this!)

[small-caps]I love this poem it's very good i connected with it.As for the grammer check I'm not so good myself . this really is some good work.

First of all,
I wanted to start off by saying that this was very well written.
But i don't like how you used some of the words in here like "raging fever" or "ugly duckling."
Maybe thats just my opinion.
But, you did a good job on it but I would try to use words that connect the poem together so that it has a nice flow.
I hope this helps.
-Rem