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I've really felt like crap today and this is all I've come up with along with a few other things so feel free to say anything!! Oh and comment with a title? I really need one

Anybody can like another,
But can you love?
Can you tell me how it works inside your head?
Is your heart truly involved?
Can we really fall out of love?
Can you answer these questions,
In all honesty?

Hi there! I'm glad I'm the first one to read this! I think that a lot of people think these same exact questions in their head about everyday, but sometimes we can't see the answers until it is the right time. I think a good Title of the poem would be Questioning, but that's just me. Lol.

I'm not really good at reviewing, but from what I could tell I didn't see anything wrong. I hope that you feel better and that you answer your questions so you can feel better!! Well...

Keep On Writing!!!

--Jalmoc

Hi there!
I've read other poems that you've written and I must say that even though a lot are short, they are excellent! This one especially, I could relate to- I know that the sort of questions you've asked in this poem are asked by people on a regular basis (myself definitely included) and you've done a superb job of putting it all into words and into such a short poem! Once again, I am wowed by how much you can put into a small space!

Can we really fall out of love?

-This line is my favourite, because I've been struggling with the question for so long, and I love how you've added this!

As for a title, I think that Jalmoc has a fitting suggestion! That's my opinion.

Anyway, thanks for a great read, and happy writing
-Briggsy

Hey AlyKat!

I really only have a few suggestions. I don't really feel like you have a whole poem here. Maybe an outline for one... Alright you need to try to answer your own questions. Or explain why you have these questions! Why are you even wondering about love first off? I would defiantly say add more! Also who is 'you'.

Please, PM me or post on my wall if you have any questions or need help!

-Boo