And my inspiration walked right out the door.

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This is a a little something I wrote, dedicated Nate. Sir, you should know that you have been such a big inspiration to so many of us. I say with great pleasure, that I am now enjoying the life I'm living. If it weren't for you, sir, I would still be that little coward, pretending she is all brave, when she can't do anything to save her life. You've made me believe in myself and stand up for myself. You have allowed me to grow into my opinion of life, and not anybody elses. If it was because of us that you left, this is a sorry on behalf of YWS.


I start by saying these two words,
whose meaning I thought was lost.
But today, I seemed to have found its place,
Right here, in this very text.

Thank you.
It's harder to say express it than it seems.
I doubt even the best of writers,
will not have the words enough to express it truly.

And just when we all thought you were like God,
always making everything appear like magic.
You walked out through that big red door,
my inspiration tagging along with you.

Oh, Nate.
Why is it with so much hate,
do you not see,
the many supporters behind you?

Is it because of a few,
that made you go "poof",
and blinded you from seeing,
your friends and our YWS family.

So, I start by saying sorry,
because I'm starting to worry.
That I might become that wimpy kid again,
the one you helped me escape from.

Home is nothing like itself,
when it's owner just left.
Leaving his guests hopeless,
and sadness settles in our hearts.

Sir,
Are you even human?
Do you feel nothing,
making someone happy?

Why prove their point?
This whole "out the door",
is just a stupid fight.
Let it go, and come back home.

Here is where you belong.
Last edited by TwistedMuffins on Wed Sep 21, 2011 2:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Awwie!! This is so sweet!! Nate will be so happy to know such a lovely poem has been written for him!! I think you've done a fabulous work!! Love it!! And before i read the content, it's title got me a bit engaged.. While I waited for it load I was making guesses what could it be about!! But not even the best of my guesses could have been better than what you have written!!
Harshita:)
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Hi muffins!

I am glad you wrote this. I think, if Nate ever sees it he'll be really pleased to know that someone out there is missing him. I think its just a little sorry from all of us.

I couldn't see any mistakes, but that was because I wasn't looking for any. I was just admiring how sweet it was of you to put this poem together.

Great Job, and awesome idea.

Deanie x
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Super like: a poem dedicated to Nate! He sure would be pleased when he learns this. I find no mistakes 'cos I wasn't really looking for any. Writing is to express, not to impress and so your message was fully stated and that's the only thing important. Great job, amazing idea. Keep writing! xD
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I Am Speechless.... :')

Great Job Soxxiee! <3

A Very True Poem. I Hope Sir Nate, see's this. :'D

Love,
Cookie ^^
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