Wow..... That was an EPIC beginning for a story!!!! I sincerely enjoyed the way you portrayed the character. As it was in a good and well constructed story, you made everything seem real!!! I just love it to bits and i cant wait to read more!!!
Mr. Scorpio says productivity is up 2%, and it's all because of my motivational techniques -- like donuts and the possibility of more donuts to come. — Homer Simpson
