Wow..... That was an EPIC beginning for a story!!!! I sincerely enjoyed the way you portrayed the character. As it was in a good and well constructed story, you made everything seem real!!! I just love it to bits and i cant wait to read more!!!
/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./ — Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)
