To all those who wander

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For those avid Tolkien fans, like me, who've read the Return of the King enough times, you'll find a line in the poem comes from this quote:
“All that is gold does not glitter, not all those who wander are lost; the old that is strong does not wither, deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be woken, a light from the shadows shall spring; renenwed shall be blade that was broken, the crownless again shall be king.” The line: 'Not all those who wander are lost' inspired me to write this poem, and since I borrowed it from Tolkien, I'll give him his credit.

Those who wander

I once walked along the weary path,
in places t'was bent and broken.
Where many feet had long before come,
to wander aimlessly beyond.

There are those who lost their way.
But not all those who wander are lost,
some just look to walk along;
until they reach an end at last.

But I chose not the path,
I chose to go another way.
To start a trail for others to follow,
for I go where no path is.

I go beneath the starlit skies,
into the dark of night.
And in the day under the sun,
to places none have yet to come.

I walk alone, but shan't walk lonely,
for where I go, none else shall go.
Not all those who wander are lost,
but only I know where my path goes.
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I'm afraid I don't have a ton to say about this, except that I really enjoyed reading it. Your prose is simple but elegant, simultaneously painting a picture and playing out a deeper meaning. The language you use embodies your purpose and your use of a JR Tolkien quote! I really, really enjoyed this--sorry if this isn't a real review but I wanted to let you know!

Thanks for the read

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I don't have much to say other than this is an amazing poem with more conviction than I thought it would originally. The usage of J.R.R Tolkien's quote was just fantastic- as I too am nutty for his work. It was great to see that when you used it you credited him but also made it your very own. This was just great, and I can't really offer any criticism for you.

Oh look, it appears I did have much to say. :)
'Evil exists in all of us Torak. Some fight it. Some feed it. That is how it has always been.'

"There is always a choice," said Torak, and he backed off the cliff.




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This is really good to me. Makes me think about what path i'm on and makes me want to be more adventitious in my own life. Thumbs up!
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Sppechless :-) simple and lovely.
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