I need help believing,Over all, good poem, I like it, keep writing, hope I was a bit helpful at least.
That you are on my side.
That you are not going to hurt me,
Too many times I’ve cried.Maybe add because at the beginning of this.
Believing that,
In your mind there are no schemes.
You don’t plan to screw me over,
Or kill my hopes and dreams.Like it. Good job.
You would be by me,
But would inch away.
Until you, I couldn’t see,
And I would be the one to pay.So, your believe in him was fake?
My heart has suffered,
Because of this thing.What thing?
It can’t last any longer,
It can’t take this sting.By it you mean your heart?
So I tell you,no comma.
All of this and more.
You understand and change,
And you don’t walk out the door.Like the change here.
You showed me,No comma.
I don’t need to run and hide.
That you care,
I believe that you are on my side.[color=#4000BF]Take out that.
keep up the good work 