He makes me smile
My real smile,
He makes me laugh
My real laugh,
He makes me
Who I want to be
He makes me feel
So happy,
He makes me feel
Amazing,
He makes me feel
Like myself.
When he looks at me
I melt,
When he smiles at me
I get warm and fuzzy,
When he hugs me,
My heart beats faster.
He makes me
Feel safe,
He makes me
Feel noticed,
He makes me,
Feel inspired.
He doesn’t seem to care,
That I am a shattered doll,
That has been broken,
So many times
And despite my flaws,
I think he,
Could be the one.
I never used to dream,
At all,
Never used to fall asleep,
Easily,
He makes it easier.
He makes me,
Believe in true love,
All over again,
He makes me,
Believe in myself,
All over again,
He completes me,
He makes me.
My real smile,
He makes me laugh
My real laugh,
He makes me
Who I want to be
He makes me feel
So happy,
He makes me feel
Amazing,
He makes me feel
Like myself.
When he looks at me
I melt,
When he smiles at me
I get warm and fuzzy,
When he hugs me,
My heart beats faster.
He makes me
Feel safe,
He makes me
Feel noticed,
He makes me,
Feel inspired.
He doesn’t seem to care,
That I am a shattered doll,
That has been broken,
So many times
And despite my flaws,
I think he,
Could be the one.
I never used to dream,
At all,
Never used to fall asleep,
Easily,
He makes it easier.
He makes me,
Believe in true love,
All over again,
He makes me,
Believe in myself,
All over again,
He completes me,
He makes me.
I'm just kidding, of course, but I thought your piece was great! The rythm was a little wierd, and I didn't really see a structure. Now, poems don't need to rhyme, but they should flow smoothly.
