i Was Here

I Was Here
I Lived
I Loved
I Cared
IGive It My All
I Did my Best
Not Becase Of You
Becase Of God
I Am Not Hurt
Not Dieing
I Was Here
Im Healing
when i leave This World
Ili Leave With No Regets
I Was Here
I Dont Need Money To Get AnyWhere
I Was Here
I Did
I Done
I Can
Dont Give Up
I Was Here To Stay
An'it Dieing No Way
Im Staying not Looking Back
Im not Going No Where Im going To Survive
I Want To Live
And I Can Now

Three things I wanted to point out. First, you capitalize the first letter of almost every word. Is that on purpose? Generally you don't do that in poetry. Second, you switch tenses once or twice so it gets a bit confusing. Third, there are some mispelled words. That's about it. This poem has a real punch to it if you read it fast. I liked it. Though it's not a complete issue, some formatting would help the eyes.

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I Was Here
I Lived
I Loved
I Cared
IGave It My All
I Did my Best
Not Becase Of You,
Becase Of God
I Am Not Hurt
Not Dying

I Was Here
I'm Healing
when I leave This World
I'll Leave With No Regrets
I Was Here
I Dont Need Money To Get AnyWhere
I Was Here
I Did
I Done
I Can
Don't Give Up
I Was Here To Stay
Ain't dying, No Way
I'm Staying, not Looking Back
I'm not Going, No Where Im going To Survive
I Want To Live
And I Can Now

Hey, so, I usually don't go in to nitpicking stuff but since I'm first to review this thing, I will do so today! I'm afraid there were quite many grammatic errors here... well, well, here I go. (Wait, before I begin, I won't change every caps-locked letter in to a little one but I think you should!)

I Was Here
I Lived
I Loved
I Cared
IGive It My All I suggest you change this line to something similar to I gave it everything, since you've written the lines above in past tense.
I Did my Best
Not Becase Of You
Becase Of God And here, I find it sad that you say you did it for god, didn't you live and love for yourself?
I Am Not Hurt
Not Dieing - think you mean Dying
I Was Here
I'm Healing
When I leave This World
Ili Leave With No Regets - think you mean I'll
I Was Here
I Dont Need Money To Get Anywhere
I Was Here
I Did - I did? What do you mean with that.. what did you do?
I Done - you can't say "I Done" in that case you must say "I've done" but then there's still the question... what did you do?
I Can - again, what is it that you can?
Dont Give Up
I Was Here To Stay
An'it Dieing No Way - think you mean Ain't
I'm Staying not Looking Back
I'm not Going No Where I'm going To Survive - NowhereI Want To Live
And I Can Now

- I think this line would sound better if you wrote, "And now I can"

Soo, that was it! Overall, this was a quite messy poem, you want alot with it so I think it do have potenital.. but as it is,, it's a whole lot of words, but with little meaning. You need to be more creative, use more imagery, show us don't tell!

Good Luck & Keep Writing

// Demoness

I agree with the reviewers above. This is pretty good, but the mistakes are distracting, to say the least. I would go in and take the time to highlight them, but, again, the above reviewers caught them all.

I Was Here
I Lived
I Loved
I Cared
IGive It My All Space needed.
I Did my Best
Not Becase Of You Because
Becase Of God Because
I Am Not Hurt
Not Dieing Dyeing
I Was Here
Im Healing I'm
when i leave This World I
Ili Leave With No Regets I'll, Regrets
I Was Here
I Dont Need Money To Get Any SpaceWhere Don't
I Was Here
I Did
I Done
I Can
Dont Give Up Don't
I Was Here To Stay
An'it Dieing No Way Ain't, Dyeing
Im Staying not Looking Back I'm
Im not Going No Where Im going To Survive I'm
I Want To Live
And I Can Now

This poem is boring. Honestly, I don't feel like you put enough emotion in it. You need to proof read EVERYTHING before you post. You have tons of spelling errors, and no grammar. You cut up the lines weirdly.

I feel like I've read this before...

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