Juste Moi

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So I read Harry Potter and admire Longbottom
So I still watch Zack & Cody, and other Disney shows
So I like Adrian Monk’s weird character role
And I still say punk rock is the best of all.

I have always been different, from when I was young
Not like I’m very old now but that doesn’t matter
I may have the weirdest collection of pals ever
from the outgoing to the oddest outcastsof all.
Yes I still say, proud to be myself.

Who else can be my weight and still be a girl?
Who else can care so less about what others say of her?
Who else can look so innocent and still be the one
to scare the seniors with one look of hers?

Who else can have a glare session
with the scariest supervisor?
Who else can be this low profile girl
Wear orange and still braid her hair, oily as is was?
Who else can sing‘Last to know’
And cry just there?
Who else has every movie's trailer memorized
but hasn't watched even one?

Ask me what I love about myself
And I’ll quote all the above
My friends will hit me with my shoes
coz theirs are too precious
And I know it’s coz they care
That’s all that really matters
For my loved ones
I live my days,
For them
this weirdo goes on.
####I lost my rhyming at the end, got bored of writing about moi. :D #####
Last edited by DukeofWonderland on Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:05 pm, edited 4 times in total.
"The duke had a mind that ticked like a clock and, like a clock, it
regularly went cuckoo."
-- Terry Pratchett, "Wyrd Sisters"




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I really like this. You must have a very colourful personality. Yeah, the rhyming was a bit off, but it doesn't really matter. If you are writing about yourself then that's godo enough. You seem to be a nice person- if I was to bump into you on the street I would give you a massive hug. Judos :)




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Spelling issues: The Zac in "Zac and Cody" is actually spelled Zack (don't ask why I know this). Chics is also spelled "chicks" since chic is usually a word to describe something stylish.

I thought it was a very interesting poem, like nothing I have ever seen before. It is written in prose-style so it reads easy but there is no real rhyme scheme. I admire your unconventional style, as I am the non-conformist myself. Keep writing, and see where it takes you! :D



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