I like it, it's pretty good for a three-year-old. My only nitpick is that you spelled beasts wrong. You put "beats." Other than that, it's pretty good spelling and grammer. Good job! -tgirly
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people. -Abraham Joshua Heschel
In my honest opinion, it sounds like an intelligent rambling three year old. While I understand the motivation for posting it, to illicit a response from YWSers about your prodigee-like upbringing having written since you were younger, I think this type of post should be more for you, a memento. Your writing changes as you age, experience more, and learn more. You're three year old self does not really have much bearing on who you are now. So keep writing, and live in the moment!
Follow your passion, stay true to yourself, never follow someone else’s path unless you’re in the woods and you’re lost and you see a path then by all means you should follow that. — Ellen Degeneres
