That was a vary inspirational poem. I loved it keep on writeing!
IHI means hi backwards, forwards, vertical, horizontal, and any other way and is pronounced by saying the individual letters, like so I H I. I came up with IHI as my thing, don't take it or I will send a scary monster after you ; D
I was going to write a really thorough-good review, but I started it, it came out WAY too harsh for my liking, and it all really just boiled down to this:
I didn't like the ending. He got a nice girl to help him? I don't have that so my futures bad?
See what I am saying? That makes your poem much to mainstream and unoriginal. Please change that. I think it's nice if you can write about a dyslexic kid finding hope, and you wrote beautifully. However, you took it all apart by bringing it into the love direction. See what I'm saying?
-Skis
By nature, all language is flawed.
"Peace cannot be kept by force, it can only be achieved by understanding," - Albert Einstein
