Soaps, ropes, popes.

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emoticon220
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:44 am
emoticon220 says... · Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:44 am
Soap on a rope.
Held by the Pope.
The Pope is a dope,
Because he likes to mope
over his soap...
on a rope,
and rejection by Hope.

(This poem brought you you by the letter RAZCOON and the letter EMOTICON220)
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:45 am
Razcoon says... · Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:45 am
I...cannot believe you actually posted it. xDD Not that it isn't beautiful. Because it is. I mean, I helped. How much or beautiful can it be? ;D
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 3:22 am
ballerina13 says... · Mon Jun 27, 2011 3:22 am
Hello! This was so funny and...random, but I loved it! Your rhyming was nice. It was just really short, but I know it was just for fun. Great job. Sorry this is so short.
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Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:09 am
cupcake says... · Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:09 am
Hello emoticon220!
I like this poem, don't get me wrong, but it very similar (almost the same) to a poem my drama teacher read to me from a poetry book. Apart from that it is great. A clever poem. Keep writing! :D
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Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:27 am
TheCodex says... · Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:27 am
I lol'd seriously. If it's got the pope in it... it's a funny poem. Nothing like a little funny to get you smiling. Nice work.
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Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:08 pm
BelarusBirdy says... · Thu Jun 30, 2011 2:08 pm
Okay, that is really weird. :) Sounds like something I would say. Quietly. In the middle of math class. Or maybe science class.
Wow. This reminds me of all my friends in Vermillion. Sadly, I just moved and I have to find more crazy people to hang out with.
Well, anyways, this is completely insane, yet awesome too.
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