Amazement

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She is a magician who leaves her audience in awe at her performance.
With spectacles like no other that are indescribable with words.
She lives simply and nothing around her seem to spectacular,
but Amazement knows that in everything you can find something fantastic.
She dances through life with electric blue hair
and a curiosity for everything.
Amazement collects trinkets from garage sales,
but she also puts on a show so grand many believe that nothing could compare. Amazement travels the world to see what it holds and
runs in her yard for the treasure untold.
Little kids know her best
but with many the close friendship doesn’t last.
Many come by to say hello and others will stay to have a short talk.
But there are some who stay close by and never leave Amazement’s show. Amazement has her show
but she also hides in the simplest places we know.




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You should break the lines up into smaller lines so it'll flow better. I liked it, though, in my opinion, it may have been a little repetitive. You should do a series of poems, like do other emotions. I'd love to read those too. Good job on grammer :)
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
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Wow, this was Amazing haha. But really this was very good at first i thought you were talking about a magician and her show, and then when you keep reading you learn that its about a girl who to me seems like just a happy little girl who love to live life to the fullest. She reminded me of Pippi Longstocking in a way. This story made me smile and I liked it very much! Excellent job!
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