Running

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That’s too bad.
That’s the end.
No hard feelings about it.
Pictures broken,
No more friends,
Parent busy home.
So go on,
Leave me alone.
I don’t want you here.
You’re the only one I know.
Now I want you to leave me.

Year by year flashing by.
Nothing there to stop me.
Only happiness tonight
Is that I am lonely.

Fighting tears every time,
I’m so sick of emotion.
People simply pass me by,
Eyes so full of repulsion.
Got to leave, got to run,
Must escape this existence.
I’m not sorry for my act,
I don’t seek repentance.

Year by year flashing by.
Nothing there to stop me.
Only happiness tonight
Is that I am lonely.

So go on,
Leave me alone.
I don’t want you here.
You’re the only one I know.
Now I want you to leave me.
For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skywards.




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This is very emotional and nice. I liked the way you wrote it, with such passion. This was so beautiful.

Keep Writing!

Nike :)
"If I look like a monster,' he says roughly, 'then no one will be surprised when I do monstrous things." - A.B. Poranek




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The lyrics were good, and the descriptions were present but also a little vague. That might have been what you were going for though. But the great thing is I could almost hear a tune go with it, and that's what the goal is with lyrics. :) keep writing.
'Evil exists in all of us Torak. Some fight it. Some feed it. That is how it has always been.'

"There is always a choice," said Torak, and he backed off the cliff.



Lots of times you have to pretend to join a parade in which you're not really interested in order to get where you're going.
— Christopher Darlington Morley