Life Part 1

This is alot of quotes and questions I made up on the spot. Raw, unedited things that go through my mind. We are all human so I know you may have thought of some too. So if you have comment if you haven't oh well. Enjoy.


How can you love me for who I am, when I don't even know who that is?

My greatest fear is not that I am inatiquate, its that I will fail at trying to find myself.

If life is about finding & creating yourself, then why do so many people change themselves.

I say that I love how I look, but its just like make up. Only temporory.

My heart is like a fireplace... warm, strong, and full of flames.

Being a writer, it is my job just not to tell the "Happy Ever after" but also those who can't have a happy after.

Im happy with my looks. Still I try to achive a look I will never have.

I've been down a bad bad road that many don't know of. I block people out for I am afraid they will leave me.

The only bad thing about living is not leaving something behind when you go.

I wanna be a superstar. Yet, it is hard to obtain, so I wear my stars upon my wrist until I am able to make others stars themselves. **

How can I grow up to tell my kids life will get better as you grow up? When reality it only gets worse.

My mind is like the sea. Vast, deep, and able to swallow "ships" hold.

Being black is hard. I will always be seen as the "sterotypical black guy".

"No one understands me!!!" *BOOWHO* No one ever will unless you show it.

The wind blows, the clock tolls, the earth shakes, and hearts break.

I hate the silence because it speaks the truth of all my lies.

I don't wanna grow up to be like the man I hate.

You are smart. You are strong. Rise up and find where you belong.

Imperfections is God ways of telling you that life is what he makes it.

God gave you your body. It may be imperfect to you. But its damn near perfect to me.

Don't change for anyone. For when you do, you will become noone.

I search for the me I will never find.

I am not mean. I just dont want to relive my past of the weakling.

I was bullied... I was picked on....

I grew up afraid of the world... Little did I know I would grow up and make the world my toilet.

Help others, your ass got it made! What about those who don't?

LEAVE YOUR FEARS BEHIND! And jump deep into the water of your future.

yesterday is gone. The past has dissolved. & your future is today.

Love is not bought or found. It is made between two hearts.

I fear of growing up lonely....

I want to make a difference.

I want to be on top of the world.

I will stop buying into the typical worldly things.

I wish to detach myself from the me of "yesterday"

Im glad to be alive.

I'm man enough to tell the world of my life. Are you?

I will stop taking myself so seriously.

I will have alot more fun.

Video girls are the victims of shitty men in the world.

Its no one's fault but your own.

I say to you, that there is always something out there for you. You just have to find it.

Your past is just a mental road block holding you away from your future.

Stop judging... Stop fighting... Start loving

In the end everyone ends up alone. Some singles... others doubles....

I DONT PROMOTE FASHION MAGAZINES!!!

I love to find people who are happy with themselves just the way they are.

If you fat so fucking what. As long as you are healthy and happy eat what ever your heart desires.

I have one final thing to say... Never let a single moment past. For if you do you will have let greatness slip away.

END

Hello! Puppy the Bamboozler here, with a new review for you! (I couldn't help myself.)

My greatest fear is not that I am inatiquate,

Haha, the word is spelled "inadequate".

then why do so many people change themselves.

There should be a question mark at the end, there.

but its just like make up. Only temporory.

Should be "it's", and I'd use a hyphen (--) instead of that first period.

My heart is like a fireplace... warm, strong, and full of flames.

Aw, I just love this one. Very true.

Being a writer, it is my job just not to tell the "Happy Ever after" but also those who can't have a happy after.

The wording's a bit awkward here. Try... "it is my job not just to tell the "Happily Ever After", but also the story of those can't have a happy ending." Or something like that. Just make it a bit less choppy. Also, this is very, very true for writers, and not everyone realizes that.

I'll stop critiquing now, because other reviewers won't have much if I do the whole thing. ^_^

You have a good base here, you just need to build it up and make it pretty. Check out VousEsEttonant--she's done something like this before.

HEY! Im Vee. I wrote something a bit like this. But yours is very organized and much easier to follow. Mine was just random things stuck in my head. I like this.