So I was going to review your stuff, but then it seems you don't want people to read it?
First off, I want to say that critics are part of writing. I don't want to be harsh or anything, but you can't always please everyone, and it's obvious there's always going to be something wrong with your writing (I don't mean you exactly, just people in general ). So what I recommend, is that you try to post your stuff, but when you read the review, be open minded. Also, try to work on the things that people point out. If it's about the plot and they give you ideas you don't want, then it's fine. They can't always read the minds of everyone, right? But when someone reviews, it's normally to help you make the story better, and that way, you can ameliorate your style as well as build some writing habits that are better then when you first started.
When we review, we normally mean to help and not make the person feel bad and uncomfortable. I'm sorry you had to feel that way, and I'm sure nobody actually intended to do that...
I'm looking forward to reading some of your stuff on here!
PS: Oh, and if you ever want to put this story back here, can you tell me? Because it seems like an interesting story and I would be interested in reviewing it for you.
-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3 Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466