Til' Summer Comes Around

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Boo
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Thu May 26, 2011 12:23 pm
Boo says... · Thu May 26, 2011 12:23 pm
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Reedo121
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Thu May 26, 2011 12:30 pm
Reedo121 says... · Thu May 26, 2011 12:30 pm
This is way to short to be a novel. This is a short story. Just giving you a heads up the next time you want to create another story. Other than that keep it up. Also make sure to double space, when using dialog.
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