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anti-pop

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Sat May 14, 2011 6:24 pm

anti-pop says... · Sat May 14, 2011 6:24 pm

so long, I've been gone
but now I'm back on yewis
can't think of more words

As you can see, I've gone on this hiatus in order to hone my poetry skills

...Bitter cold, it grows
changing holds
cynicism the new norm...
-Libretto

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HostofHorus

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Tue May 17, 2011 2:50 am

HostofHorus says... · Tue May 17, 2011 2:50 am

I'll keep my review as short as you piece.

It was funny,
I liked it,
And that is all I have to say.

~HostofHorus

HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
http://JRSStories.com
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me!

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Funkymomo

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Reviews 106

Tue May 17, 2011 11:27 am

Funkymomo says... · Tue May 17, 2011 11:27 am

so long, I've been gone
but now I'm back on yewis
can't think of more words

Yewis? Nice. haha! You could say, i'm here, YWS

And last line, let's get reviewing!

Aww, so nice! glad you're back uhh, *reads name* Antipop? Hmm, haven't seen you here in my last 6 months! Welcome back!

Light one candle instead of cursing the darkness.

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Jalmoc

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Reviews 67

Wed May 18, 2011 4:58 pm

Jalmoc says... · Wed May 18, 2011 4:58 pm

Very nice way to reintroduce yourself to YWS.

lol

If you don't take a chance, you'll always live your life in regret, so let your heart show it's true colors and admit your feelings!

Tis not the blade that took your life, but the Assassin behind it.

When Reality has all but fallen away, recreate your own world

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