Always

You were there,
When we were happy;

While laughing and giggling,
You were with me.

We were together,
Through everything;

Then why aren’t you here,
When I need you?

I need you the most now,
And you’re gone.

I am here. Don’t you remember your life verse? “For the Lord your God is with you WHERE EVER you go.”

Joshua 1:9. Yes God, thank you for reminding me.

Of course child, I wouldn’t leave you, when you I love you so much.

I love you, too, God. Thanks for being with me, always.

Always...

That was gorgeous and beautiful. Amazing job. <3 I love that Bible verse. Awesome job.

Beautiful! Well done!
Keep it up,
~FW~

Hi, Jane! Beautiful poem. Yes, God never leaves us. I love it, thanks for reminding me! xD

I think I spotted a typo though.

JaneAusten wrote:We were together,
Though everything;

I think you meant "through".

That's all! Good job!

~Solvy <3

Beautiful poem. Short, simple and sweet.

Although I do think that the second part of the poem about God seems a little bit jolting. One moment it's about 'you' who is a lover, I''m guessing? abandoning you, then it moves into God. I got a bit left behind there. Maybe you could add another stanza gradually going into more religious things?

Other than that, beautiful poem.

Oh wow. I love this!!!! What Wondrous Love is This....(reminds me of that song.) You pretty much explained my quote from C.S. Lewis...on my signature below.
Jesus shouts to us in our pains!

I love this poem!!! Good job, I am so liking!!!!!

Very well done I truly enjoyed this. I hope to read more of your work soon. I could not find anything wrong with this by grammar or spelling means so yay! Haha. Well I love it and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and Buenas Suerte. Hope you get many helpful reviews and Sayonara.
Best of wishes,
Soulkana<3