Baby Doll

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baby doll

she takes his kisses no matter what
whether they be a slap on the cheek
or the press of coldwhite knuckles

she surrenders
her body lax under the onslaught
a carefully coreographed dance
where only two can play the game
(others are banned or squashed
sequestered in silence)

eyes wide open, angel's eyes, slick with
tears blink for every fingerprint
every death of a one-cell organisim

when the days get harder
she wanders into herself
amd destroys any chance
of comforting redemption

ice cream dribbles down
her chin and on to her new dress
the sticky sugar drops are replaced
by wet cleansing kisses eager
to purge

the day she topples the crown
is the day the two sided blade becomes
reality
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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anyone...?
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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"ice cream dribbles down
her chin and on to her new dress "

haha thats kind of funny! I like your poem a lot!




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