Open, simple

Well, I'm not really one for poems that rhyme, simply because in serious poems, they can really take away from the poem itself. However, even though I didn't particulary care for this type of poem, your rhyming scheme was good and nothing sounded rushed until this part:

Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.

Perhaps you should take some of those words out...they seemed like run on sentences.

I liked reading this. It's kind of sweet.
I liked these lines very much:
"Life isn't as simple as you make it appear
Even the happy people have a depth full of fear."
Nice one!!!

helloo
really sweet poem!! I don't really have any criticism

Life isn't as simple as you make it appear
Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.

I love this part!!
nice work!
-qaralynn-

Hi There, Fire! I'm Sol, and I'm going to review for you today. I like the poem, the ending was amazing. But, you should check out the puntation. In my opinion some commas would be nice.

The-Fire-godess wrote:You kiss me as you always do ,
everything seems so simple with you.

Add a comma.

The-Fire-godess wrote:There are no secrets hidden deep,
not mumbling worries as you sleep.

Same.

The-Fire-godess wrote:How can this be? Still I can't understand
why you're so easy going and unplanned,

I think that comma should be a period.

The-Fire-godess wrote:Life isn't as simple as you make it appear,

Add comma.

The-Fire-godess wrote:Even the happy people have a depth full of fear.
So please don't be afraid to let your feelings show,
I'm here for you, I promise, I refuse to let you go.

Beautiful, I love it!

Great job, keep writing!!

~Solvy <3