“I love you Rath”
I could hear his sobs as I bled to death in the arms of the man I loved
Chapter one
I opened the front door. It had been a normal day and I expected nothing less.
"Hello, I'm home!' My shoes slipped into the corner and I stepped towards the den.
"Hello?" There was no answer.
I walked into the den to see everything covered in blood. you could tell it was older almost black color. I suddenly felt faint. The tiles slipped under my bloody soles as I ran into the kitchen. I was mute, deaf, sick to death. Auto-pilot kept me going. It skimmed my fingers over the security codes. my knives and a harness fell at my feet. I put it on as
I silently and quickly snuck up to the second floor, following the blood trail. at the top i paused gathering my courage as i looked at the blood.It went into and out of my parents’ room and across the hall to my room. I crept up to their door and stole deep inside, into the shadows. I could see my mom’s hand hanging over the bed, dripping blood onto the floor. I kicked off my shoes for better traction and nimbly ran to the bedside I scanned the shadows for forms that didn’t belong there as I yanked back the covers. I barely muffled a scream. I fought the urge to puke. I had seen lots of bodies; dead, bloated, destroyed bodies after all i dead with the dead in my job and i had been ok but this was my family.
Both my mother and father’s necks had been slashed by an animal and looked like it could have been a tiger kill. My mother had many deep gashes which looked like a knife’s work.
They didn’t just kill her they destroyed her…
My fathers body was just as bad they had opened his stomach and removed all of his intestines. His face was turned towards my mother and it was obvious he had bled to death staring at her ravaged body.
I was a vampire huntress and obviously someone from my underworld connections had snitched the address of my home, my sanctuary. My parents had nothing to do with my work in fact they weren’t aware I did it. They believed I worked at a computer company. i could feel an icy rage filling my veins with energy and anger. I raced out of my parent’s room up to my door intending to murder anyone who was within. I slammed it open and raced inside. I saw a form huddled in the corner. My room’s curtains had been opened and, keeping an eye on the form realizing it was a man I ran to close them. The room plunged into blackness. i was glad that i had perfecy night vision I raced to where the form was. I put a knife to the man’s throat and whispered in cold fury
“Give me one reason to let you live murderer.”
“Because I didn’t kill your parents and two I’m your boyfriend Rath.”
I gasped shaking my head “You can’t be”
“Yes,” he replied
I whispered “If you’re Rath, who killed my parents?”
“a vampire”
“of course” I said in a hollow tone
“You said it Selena”
I dropped to my knees and ran my fingers over his beloved face. Tracing the familiar contours and shapes I began to sob. It was Rath! He held me against him as i laid my head on his chest i listened. his heart was cold and silent. wrapped in an icy embrace as he rocked me back and forth i cried myself to sleep.
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Nice blood.
