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If you sprinkle when you tinkle be a sweetie and wipe the seatie .Don;t be dum have fun.

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34rashard wrote:If you sprinkle when you tinkle,(comma) be a sweetie and wipe the seatie( dude.. that's not a word.) .Don't be dumb ,have fun.

This is pretty funny. Just try to place it in poetry format.
like so-

If you sprinkle when you tinkle,
be a sweetie and wipe the seatie.
Don't be dumb-
have fun.

Overall:
Loss for words.
Just haven't decided if that's a good thing or not...

Keep Writing!
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-Jojo

Cute. Hardly original though; that little mnemonic has been around for ages. Posting up things that aren't yours is never a good idea; it is usually plagiarism, and it can get you into major trouble of the legal and lifelong kind. In this case, you're lucky that no one person can claim ownership of those couplets since they're part of the common lore, and have been for many years.

Still, in the future, remember to post only works that you have created and written yourself. Emphasis on the "created".

In any case, I am left wondering why you posted this -- you do realize that you basically wasted one hundred points?