So I got the PM for Nate and I would really like to share my lyrical poetry. I hope that I'm doing this right..
If you would like to review or comment I would greatly appreciate it! Thanks!
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Prolems
The first step to recovery is admitting you have a problem.
And when you have a problem you typically got to solve 'em.
Soul blowing away feeling like colored leaves in the autumn.
Mind rotting away forgetting everything that you taught him.
It's crazy how depression can alter the ones you love.
Desperately grasping for hope and looking to above.
Face laced with tracks from all the tears that they cried.
Never moving forward living life life like they died.
They feel lost and alone.
Someone help me out and give me a way to come home.
So by now you figured that I'm the one with the problem.
But I'm stuck in this phase and I don't know how to solve 'em.
I wrote this just now. So a grand total of 15 minutes! Haha, I wrote it without listening to a instrumental. The next one that I post I'll make sure it's written to a beat.
Thanks for reading.
