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I need a place for me wonder

lele253isme wrote:I'm tired of the same old days
The same old rough and rainy days
No, I'm not getting any younger
I need a new place for me wonder (This doesn't quite make sense. You might want to consider some re-phrasing.)
The way I see it,
Life is a maze
And I don't want to end up
Old and crazed
To live and know
That I have wasted days on end
Pondering and wondering
Who I was
But if now I could take the chance
To live my life to its full expanse
Who knows what will happen next

I'm tired of the same old days
The same old rough and rainy days
No, I'm not getting any younger
I need a new place for me wonder (I couldn't understand this.)
The way I see it
Life is a maze (nice line)
And I don't want to end up
Old and crazed
To live and know
That I have wasted days on end
Pondering and wondering
Who I was
But if now I could take the chance (I think it'd be better if 'could' is removed)
To live my life to its full expanse
Who knows what will happen next

Also, I feel that punctuations would make it even better to read...
Personally speaking, it's a treat to read your poems because they always have a good message...

I'm tired of the same old days Put a period here.
The same old rough and rainy days Re word this, don't repeat anything as an end word twice in a row

The way I see it Put a comma here.
Life is a maze And a period at the end here.

Pondering and wondering Re word this too, these words basically mean the same thing.

To live my life to its full expanse Comma here
Who knows what will happen next Period here.