these triumphs are failures in disguise

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Beware of the pretentious!

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Also, I like tildes.
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4/1/11

We proposed with lollipop sticks in our teeth.
chewed down to bleeding stubs between our lips
as time moves backwards and we see how we were.

The things that haunt us stay
because we chain them to our hearts;
wooden stakes and chains as delicate as cobwebs.

We'll spread our wings and fly
but our feathers are layered tissue and wax
and like Icarus we'll burn before we're free.

These triumphs are only failures in disguise
and in the end we'll rip the skin from our bones
and scrub the silt from our eyes in our desperation to be clean,
so that only once we might breathe the truth.

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Pretentiousness! I have it.
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4/2/11

these symphonies drip
like so many lights on glass
I only see you

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Bad haiku is bad. But whatevski.
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Not too shabby haiku is not too shabby.

"These triumphs are only failures in disguise
and in the end we'll rip the skin from our bones
and scrub the silt from our eyes in our desperation to be clean"

I really like those lines. Likereally.



For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle