I know how you feel with this. Pencils get lost so frequently...anyway, I enjoyed reading this. The only thing would be that the second stanza has sort of a different flow to it than the others, I think...it seems a little different, but if you like it then keep it. Keep writing!
"The only bad ideas are the ones never tried." - Puck, The Sisters Grimm
hahaha so cute. I understand the feeling. When I write I excape my pain and can go anywhere. I hate when my pencil runs away. I can't think anything to say to help except, keep writing.
This is cute. I loved it. Pencils run away from me too. It almost seems like I repel pencils. It's great to read a poem that isn't sad or depressing. Anyway, great poem and keep up the good work.
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends. - Ethel Watts Mumford A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out. - Walter Winchell “I’ll Surprise you, I promise” -Adam Lambert
this is a really unique poem because usually all the poems i read are all serious and intense. but this was really light hearted and i loved it. it was so cute and i also loved the rhyming.
