Dear Mr. President

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In 1858, Abraham Lincoln had accepted the challenge to run against Stephen Douglas who was up for re-election. Lincoln challenged Douglas to many different debates and ended up having seven all total.

Standing side by side, you would have thought it was the sun and moon up there on the stage. The two couldn’t have been more different if they’d tried.

Douglas was a man of small stature, he was a heavier-set man, cocky, quite arrogant, well-dressed, and spoke with much eloquence.

Mr. Lincoln, on the other hand, was the complete opposite. Lincoln was very tall (around 6’4), skinny (180 at most), he dressed in well-worn clothes, and when he spoke he used words that his uneducated family would have been able to understand, he had a down-home feel to him.

This situation reminds me very much of our current president. Mr. Obama is well-known for his eloquence-even though he reads what has been written for him on a teleprompter- he wears all the right name brand suits, he tends to believe that if you don’t agree with him, your obviously the one who’s wrong, and that’s where his arrogance and cockiness seem to show the most.

Maybe our new president should take some much needed advice from one of the greatest presidents in American history. People seem to respond better to the more down to earth feel that Mr. Lincoln appeared to have down to a pat.
Lincoln was able to gain support, not by what he was wearing or by the fancy words he spoke, but by his down-home feel, and how he was able to relate to everyday people.

President Obama could learn a lot from our former president, he might gain more support from the people that disagree with his policies the most, if he opened his eyes and his heart to things that are different and foreign to him. I’m not totally optimistic, though, that Obama will actually ever leave his prideful ways to hear somebody else out.

But as shown by the Lincoln and Douglas campaign, people relate more to down-home people than others who feel as if they are smarter than the rest of the world.

I’m sorry Mr. President, but I disagree with the way you treat the same average people who elected you into the position you now hold.

(This is completely an opinion piece, it's based on my beliefs, and the facts I have gained from learning about Abraham Lincoln this year. This is meant to stir up controversy, I want to you to think and come up with reasons as to why you disagree with me. Enjoy >_<)
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What a wonderful piece!! I really like it and the picture at the end made quite a statement! ^.^
I didn't see any problems with it at all, it was well written and had great grammar and spelling. One question though:
What made you write this??

Great job!

Keep writing,
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Hear, hear! I also think it helped that the olden-day presidents were working men. These days... not so much.




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Justagirl~ Thank you so much for the words of encouragement! I seriously appreciate it! Hearing feedback really makes me want to continue writing!

Well honestly? I wrote this because of an expert out of my English book that I thought was quite interesting. It was about how Lincoln and Douglas were so different in what they believed and how they acted and I just found that it seemed to apply to our now president. I want to be a free-lance writer as I grow older and this was one of my first articles.

Thank you again for commenting and telling me what you think!
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Stori~ I totally agree! Most of the men these days that are involved in politics really just don't do much. I think we all expect too much out of them >_<
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This is really good.
Opinion pieces are hard to write, especially something so stinging. Instead of just saying 'I don't like him and that is that' you gave examples and reasons. I don't think this would be out of place in any professional newspaper.

Although I personally don't believe in your opinions of Obama, I can appreciate anyone who can state their opinions so well. I personally don't believe it is my area to state my opinions on Obama because I am not American, and I do not know of the mood and political landscape in America.

In conclusion, this was a very well informed and mature work.
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Being a supporter of not supporting Barrack Obama, I completley agree with you. Even though I won't get too far into it, because politics shouldn't be discussed in a reply, there is a reason why Obama won the campaign. He was the EXACT opposite of Bush. Bush had a terrible support rate, he spoke southern, and made some aggressive decisions. The public did not like this. Obama, who was well dressed, spoke classy, and made peacful promises, used this for himself and became the president.



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