Smile!

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cupcake
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Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:55 am
cupcake says... · Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:55 am
Smile 'till your cheeks hurt.
You'll have a lot more fun.
When you're happy smile,
You can never be done.

Have fun with all your friends.
Just smile all the way.
Your smile looks so great,
So have a happy day!
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends.
- Ethel Watts Mumford
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
- Walter Winchell
“I’ll Surprise you, I promise”
-Adam Lambert
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emmer132010
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Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:27 am
emmer132010 says... · Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:27 am
Very short and cute poem. To be honest, I couldn't help but smile when I read it. I don't know if I can offer any real criticism on the poem but it's just so fun and cute that I thought you might appreciate a reply about how much I liked it. :)
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:35 am
cupcake says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:35 am
Thanks emmer132010! You thought right, I do appreciate the reply.
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends.
- Ethel Watts Mumford
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
- Walter Winchell
“I’ll Surprise you, I promise”
-Adam Lambert
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qaralynn
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:27 pm
qaralynn says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:27 pm
hahah this poem made me laugh XD nice write!
"If they can't be with you at your worst, then they don't deserve to be with you at your best."
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Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:52 pm
Upile says... · Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:52 pm
wow this poem is extra cute and it made me do exactly as it instructed smile.. That was super cute.
Bravo hun,
Keep it up!
x Upile x
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cupcake
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Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:01 am
cupcake says... · Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:01 am
Thanks for the reviews.
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends.
- Ethel Watts Mumford
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
- Walter Winchell
“I’ll Surprise you, I promise”
-Adam Lambert
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MissRockers
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Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:59 am
MissRockers says... · Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:59 am
Perfect poem to cheer people up! I like it a lot. It's the perfect length too, short and sweet.
Don't walk in front of me: I may not follow
Don't walk behind me: I may not lead
Just walk beside me and hold my hand

I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me.
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