Who's at fault

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jujubean05
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Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:37 pm
jujubean05 says... · Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:37 pm
I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story and other poems!!
If life gives you lemons.................make beef stew!!!
If someone is taller than you............stand on something so you can punch them! lol thats an inside joke so if you don't get sorry.
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jujubean05
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Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:42 pm
jujubean05 says... · Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:42 pm
I don't really car for this poem myself. I don't know why I posted it. Please check out my short stoies though!!
If life gives you lemons.................make beef stew!!!
If someone is taller than you............stand on something so you can punch them! lol thats an inside joke so if you don't get sorry.
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jujubean05
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Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:43 pm
jujubean05 says... · Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:43 pm
I don't really car for this poem myself. I don't know why I posted it. Please check out my short stoies though!!
If life gives you lemons.................make beef stew!!!
If someone is taller than you............stand on something so you can punch them! lol thats an inside joke so if you don't get sorry.
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emmaline49
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:34 pm
emmaline49 says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 5:34 pm
Who know you'd break my heart
You did your part
Now I've got to pick up the pieces
I need your kisses

I miss the way it use to be
You were my heart's key
What happened to us
You made me feel like a goddess
Now we're torn apart
Was it my fault ?

Will we ever be the same?
Whose to blame?
We may never know

This poem has possibilities. :) Work hard, make a few changes, fix that last line, and it'll be much better--I know you can do it!
In the midst of winter/I found there lay within me/an eternal summer
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