The fish poem (by appointment to twinkling person)

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I am a fat fish
Swimming in the sea
If you see an obese blob of scales
You will know that it's me

I am a fat fish
So much plumper than the rest
The fishermen all try to catch me
Because I taste the best

I am a fat fish
On a fat plate
I tried to swim away
But it was too late
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...




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LOL very funny!

I loved the obese blob of scales line, that made me laugh out loud.

Much different than your Martyr poem. Very much different.
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Fish aren't martyrs though are they? Fish are just FAT!
teehee - glad you like it
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lol, that is funny!!! :lol: very cute, and yes, that 'obese blob of scales' is hilarious!!! :D good job




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That's a load!

And stop laughing at the poor fat fish! He has diet problems I'll have you know...
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Lol, so cute!

Its silly, and if thats what you were hoping for, right on! If, however, you were to trying to tell a sad story rich with unfortunate images and metephores...

lol, just kiddin!




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Lol no! I was just doing it for Twinkle cause she thought my martyr poem was sad
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Aha! You catually called me a name other than twinkling person.
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HAH
It's such a stupid username... I refuse to call you by it...
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...



Deadlines just aren't real to me until I'm staring one in the face.
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