AWOL

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Would it be acceptable for a novel to write the following sentence?

"If she couldn’t find him, then she would officially consider him to be AWOL."

Or would I need to say something other than AWOL? Such as a betrayer or something of that nature. (The characters in my story are currently trying to find a Vampire who commited a serious illegal crime.)
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In general, it's best not to use abbreviations in your writing because not everyone will be familiar with those abbreviations. If you can substitute "AWOL" for something that works equally well or better, I suggest you do.
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Okay, thank you for the advice. I'll change that when I work on my story next. :smt001



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