i have nothing
nothing to distinguish me
from the rest of the give ups
and retries
i have no sight
thats special to
only me
i have no voice
that anyone
ever listens to
i have no love
who will love me
as much as i love them
if i did
i have no words
that stick out
and make me
feel smart
because i have no brains
nothing to brag about
at least
i have no spirit
im basically
dead inside
and sometimes
i want to
punch a wall
or yell
and scream
and kick
but i wont
ever
because i also
have no
courage
so i sit back
every day
and act like im fine
and nobody cares
nobody knows
except for me
you know that person
who said that
people only build
walls
to see who
cares enough to
break them
down
well
what if nobody
does
?
Spoiler
Thank you everyone that has said something, I lvoe it when my work is responded too. One thing though is that I am meaning for it to be the way it is, that means that I am not going to capitalize anything, I know, such a rebel. Not even the "I"s that also means no, uh, what's it called? Punctuation. I put the question mark at the end so that instead of it being a part of a sentance, it's really it's own little word right there, if you know what I mean. And I think without having anything to it except for the words, sometimes it'll come off a little stronger to a reader. Maybe not you, or maybe not anyone even on this website, but I wanted to get away from the ordinary. And you know why?
Because I can! Whoo!
So thank you so much everyone for your suggestions and I'm sorry if my poem messes with anyone's writing OCD, but I'm going to keep this poem this way.
-Leah
Because I can! Whoo!
So thank you so much everyone for your suggestions and I'm sorry if my poem messes with anyone's writing OCD, but I'm going to keep this poem this way.
-Leah
