Cyborg 1: Virus

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Kafkaescence
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:48 pm
Kafkaescence says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:48 pm
Serve.
Obey.
Protect.
Relay.
Message sent. Saved.

Access.
Denied.
Restricted.
Lies.
Error. Virus detected.

Fight.
Kill.
Blood.
Spill.
No blood. Only gears.
No difference detected. Initializing.

Alone.
Gears.
Robotic.
Tears.
Creators burning.
Warning!
System overheating.

Dust.
Gray.
Rotting.
Prey.
Cannot locate justice.
Message recovered. Save?

Serve.
Obey.
Protect.
Relay.
Error.
System has died.
Last edited by Kafkaescence on Sun Jan 23, 2011 6:16 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Tommybear
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:12 pm
Tommybear says... · Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:12 pm
I love this. I think it would be very moving if you made the cyborg turn out to be human at the end and become something
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coborski
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Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:50 am
coborski says... · Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:50 am
*Tears apart* This is really good, I love it! I honestly can't think of anything else to say, this is amazing.
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