The Lonely's Love Song

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Scarlet letters drifting down barren paths,
we are the Lonely.
We feast on the delicacies of sitting alone in a crowded room,
pairing socks when there's nothing else better to do,
and being our only friend when we need someone to talk to.
We'd like to believe that someone would stop,
acknowledge us,
and wish us good morning
before catching the 7:30 train,
but we live the lives Lonelies live.
We're never noticed.

Most of us,
the Lonely,
would like to believe someone
wants to be with us,
in either of the definitions of 'mate'.
Instead,
our sickening fantasies torture us all when companionship never arrives,
and our souls wither
to dust mites floating around a charred heart.

But fear not Lonelies,
for I have our love song.
We'll sing it in fear,
and,
maybe,
one by one,
each spring flower will bloom after perpetual hibernation.

So Lonelies,
instead of waiting for a limited edition martyr to sacrifice their social life for yours,
why not find them?
Steps take time but start crawling first.
I took a path to an uncertain future,
and to quote Bob Frost,
"That has made all the difference."
There is a cure for us,
and though you will be plagued,
search for someone to believe in,
and at the end of life you will be loved.
Apple of my soul,
Eats me whole,
Take one bite,
No delight,
Rotting hole.




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Honestly, I quite like it, very dark but interesting. The ending, though, brightens the mood ever so slightly.
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Hiya,
I really like this poem!!! You've got a really interesting style of writing, this poem is really vivid. I kind of read it, and really liked it but I just had to re-read it, and decide what I thought it meant. That's the beauty of good poetry, it's up to you what it means. Good job!
"Oh, children, children, why are you following me?"
"We couldn't sleep," said Lucy - and then she felt sure that she need say no more and that Aslan knew all they had been thinking.

The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe by C.S. Lewis.




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i couldn't agree more.....
easilyinspired wrote:Hiya,
I really like this poem!!! You've got a really interesting style of writing, this poem is really vivid. I kind of read it, and really liked it but I just had to re-read it, and decide what I thought it meant. That's the beauty of good poetry, it's up to you what it means. Good job!

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MissMadHatter wrote:Honestly, I quite like it, very dark but interesting. The ending, though, brightens the mood ever so slightly.



You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling