Definitely maybe

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I DID NOT WRITE THIS!!!!
I just wanted to share this, because i absolutely love it! It was written by one of my close friends! I relate so well to this poem i though y'all would too! enjoy this poem by my friend Allyson! :D


Definitely Maybe
by Allyson B.

The best things in life
are felt by the heart;
Unseen treasures
that never grow dark.
They first go unnoticed
but then intensify
it brings you to your knees
and tears to your eyes.
Your stomach starts to flutter
your knees begin to shake
your heart starts to pound;
you've made a huge mistake:
you told him you loved him
and don't know if it's true.
All you want to know is
how he feels of you.



Last thing you remember,
you were running for the door,
tears flowing out your eyes
you want to hear no more.
He was in mid-sentence
when you started to cry
he said the feeling wasn't mutual
you wouldn't let him explain why.
A whole bunch of questions
pop into your mind.
Are these feelings real?
You want to know why,
you can't shake them off
and leave them all behind.

Years and years later
after many broken hearts
you've been glued together
you've been torn apart.
Yet whenever you're around him
your knees still get shaky
your stomach starts to flutter
you ask, Am I crazy?
Or do I really love him?

Definitely maybe.
“Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.”
E. L. Doctorow




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I like the ending and this poem is really sweet! Your friend should join YWS(:! Lol, but I think she has a very nice flow and is a good writer. She knows how to rhyme and make the words flow. Good work Allyson(:




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haha I will definitely pass that along to Allyson! :D I am trying to get her to join, but she's not a serious writer, she just writes from time to time (: thanks for reading! :D
“Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.”
E. L. Doctorow




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omg i loved it, your friend is great..
<3 Ashley or ARBY367.




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Hey there I'm China Cookie

Your friend seems to be an amazing poet. This poem is absolutlety GGRREEAATT!!!!!!!!! i really enjoyed reading it and it has a true meaning to my lifre i think thats why i enjoy it so much..
I would love to hear more poems from your friend and definatley from you too.

Regards;
China Cookie



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