Pain.

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chynelk5
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:44 pm
chynelk5 says... · Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:44 pm
I jest at scars that bear sweet wounds.

The wounds they seep, they seep.

Mine heart in broken camouflage.

My heart it weeps, it weeps.
"I never said I'd lie and wait forever.
If I died we'd be together.
I cant always just forget her.
But she could try."
The ghost of you- MCR <3
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LeonieLacey
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:11 pm
LeonieLacey says... · Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:11 pm
Haha, i told you this was enough to make a poem! God, well i guess i should review this poem seeing as i'm the first one reading it. But i can't. It's too good. I'm sorry, i'm useless, but this is beyond me, it's stunning.
Wow, your poetry is soooo deep, and it's right from the heart, you can feel that when you're reading it.
It's simple, yet meaningful. Short and sweet. It's oozing emotion. There's not much more i can say. Just beautiful.
Well done!!!!
leonie.
The worst feeling you'll ever feel,
is sitting next to the person who means the world to you,
knowing that you mean nothing to them--Unknown
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chynelk5
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Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:33 pm
chynelk5 says... · Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:33 pm
Leonie,
Thank you :]
Chynel.
"I never said I'd lie and wait forever.
If I died we'd be together.
I cant always just forget her.
But she could try."
The ghost of you- MCR <3
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