I like this, for sure. It definitely has some relation to what I'm sure almost everyone has wanted to do at one point. I got a little confused on the second line and had to read through it twice to make sure I knew what the subject of that part was referring to--on the first read through it seemed to refer to the plaster wall. Otherwise, it was very nice: short, sweet, and to the point.
Um....short. Very short. But in that shortness you packed a powerful punch. (Please excuse the extremely corny pun.) It's kind of hard to review something so...er...brief, so yeah....I like it.
You must be swift as the coursing river, With all the force of a great typhoon, With all the strength of a raging fire, Mysterious as the dark side of the moon.
