Ice Castle

Ice castle

I live here
In my castle of ice
frozen, sparkling,
ice.

I do not feel
the chill of ice
just the warmth
of being
somewhere I love.

The sun comes up.
Melting,
breaking,
losing all that's left.

I try to rebuild
my castle
of ice.

OMG I love it! Great feeling to it also. try to use more big words!

Oh my God. I absolutely love it. It's kind of sad at the end where you say you have to rebuild your castle but thats why I love it so much. But it's not really that sad because you say you love it so it can't be that sad.

Dude, I loved this! And it sounds like everyone else does too! Maybe add a period at the end of your last sentence, and job well done!