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A poem I did for class. The idea was to prove in the poem that the narrator of the poem was clearly wrong, so I chose to do somebody who was using spell-check, because I've done it so many times.


“Pleas work on u r spell ling, deer,” my teacher said to mea.
“I find so man-e errors that it drives mea up a tree.”
Sew I put this poem two spell check just sew that
Ms. Ash could sea
that Im a very good speller and I
At lest deserve a B.
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StoryWeaver13 wrote:
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A poem I did for class. The idea was to prove in the poem that the narrator of the poem was clearly wrong, so I chose to do somebody who was using spell-check, because I've done it so many times.


“Pleas work on u r spell ling, deer,” my teacher said to mea.
“I find so man-e errors that it drives mea up a tree.”
Sew I put this poem two spell check just sew that
Ms. Ash could sea
that Im a very good speller and I
At lest deserve a B.


That is soo cute! haha...one thing, put the "u" and "r" together so it will show that the writer knew it was a word but didn't know how to spell it.. But you don't have to listen to me. Just a suggestion. Anyway, good job. Did you get your B? :P
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I LOVE this poem!
:D

Super original, creative, and adorable... wonderfully done. What a cute poem. c:
Reminds me a lot of something by Shel Silverstein in its quirkiness and voice. Highest of compliments by that, I promise. :)
Technically, this was done well to. Very nicely done. c:


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*Gasp!* Oh no, so many grammar errors! I love this poem. It's fun to read and you did a really good job on it. That's all I can think of to say. Keep poem-ing! :P

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AHAHAHA! That's great, it reminds me of myself in Elementary school. I had SUCH bad spelling, I don't think that I was that bad. But I certainly wasn't great.

It also reminds me of when I was a scene kid back in eight grade, I had poor grammar then too because I thought it was cute.

But it takes someone who knows their grammar to make the grammar this bad (like E.E. Cummings), but it must have killed you to do it.
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wow! this was a great poem
1. it was very creative
2. it was funny
3.even though it was short i enjoyed it a lot
4.loved your spelling mistakes
there is not much to criticize as this was a great poem



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