Final Goodbye.

Now it's over,my dear
and there are many questions
I would have asked
but now it's too late

To tell you the truth
it wasn't so hard
but what really hurt
was letting go

I miss the world so much
the love,the hate
the joy, the sadness
and I miss you most of all

Your laugh,that brightened my day
your eyes,your smile
the way you would look at me
the way you said you loved me

When ever I was feeling down
when ever I felt sad
you would look at me
and tell me it's gonna be alright

my love,I want to say I am sorry
for the all times I hurt you
for the promises i left unfulfilled
for the dreams that never came true

I hope to meet you some day
In this world of mine
will you remember me then?
or will I just be another person who died....

july4ruby wrote:Now it's over, {space}my dear
and there are many questions
I would have asked
but now it's too late

To tell you the truth
it wasn't so hard
but what really hurt
was letting go

I miss the world so much
the love,{space} the hate
the joy, the sadness
and I miss you most of all

Your laugh,{space}that brightened my day
your eyes,{space}your smile
the way you would look at me
the way you said you loved me

When ever I was feeling down
when ever I felt sad
you would look at me
and tell me it's gonna be alright

my love,{space}I want to say I am sorry
for the all times I hurt you
for the promisesI {capital)left unfulfilled
for the dreams that never came true

I hope to meet you some day
In this world of mine
will you remember me then?
or will I just be another person who died...You usually only have three periods

I really liked how emotional this poem was. I've experienced feelings like this and it reall struck a chord with me.

you really made me think about how important it s to enjoy someones life
my friend died and my mom said we should celebrate her life and honer what a great person she was, the gifts she brought to world and what a great unique person she really was. when she smiled the whole world seemed to smile back. when she cryed i swear the birds stopped cripping! when she was hurt everyone stopped her in the hall and asked her what happened. when she was diagnosed with cancer the whole world...well at least the whole school, and neighborhood and so may more people morned. she fought hard but she lost...for the first time she never seemed to lose. she would always keep it inside worry about others before herself. never once in all the times i sat by her bed did she complain, though she had gone trough more pain then most of us know. when i sat beside her and she ran a brush threw her hair and large chunks of beautiful red silk came out she did not even cry. i did. she thought me so much and changed. i was so sad when she left i almost forgot how to smile and laugh. i no longer had the spark she though me to have. i was surprised the world still spun. i realized then that it did though. that i also must keep going, she had changed he so much, and if she where still here today i would be leaning on her crying while she tells me she knows i will be okay it will work out because i can do it. but shes not here, not know so i must keep my chin and honer her life. because thats what she would want. i guess i should be thankful that i was blessed with her at all that she was by side for years and know i have to be by hers. she did her job now i do mine by thinking about her spectacular time on this earth and how much i loved...no love her!
thank you so much for helping understand this with your amazing story