Totally Different

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I'm the cliche,
In this hell they call school.
I'm the nerdy girl,
Ignored by the cool.
I'm the one quiet,
While the others are loud.
I'm the one trying,
to not hear the sound.

You're the cliche,
In this heaven they call school.
You're the superstar,
The leader of the cool.
You're the one talking,
The one that's so loud.
You're the one trying,
To amp up the sound.

We're totally different,
And we don't understand,
The other ones world,
From homecoming to band.
Ignoring each other,
Is what we do best.
So let's keep it that way,
Being nice is such a pest.


Hey guys, just wrote this down in some freetime... Hope you enjoy. Comments and reviews are great. Likes are cool. And if anyone has any information about where the heack "Spell Check" went, that's be awesome.
♥ you
-iheartbooks
"As the hungry are deprived of food, I am deprived of sympathy for those who deprive me of my sanity." ~Anonymous




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This is cool. It sounds just like I've always read about public school (I'm home schooled). I think it adds a cool ring to it the way it rhymes.
My kitty avatar is my minion. She sneaks everywhere and always tells me whats going on.
*kitty avatar sneaks up and whispers in my ear*
Oh... She says it is time...
*grabs you and puts you in box*
Perfect!




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It's very good. The poem flows very well and I liked it. If you write more poem or just anything, pm me because I want to read more of your writings.

Keep writing because you can write,

Alicia.
"The nicest part is being able to write down all my thoughts and feelings, otherwise I‘d absolutely suffocate."- Anne Frank




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I love love this!
It flows very well and I could almost
here a little tune inside my head whilst reading this.
Keep on writing (:
I like Rainbows. ;)




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