Author's note: This was just a bit of a laugh, it doesn't sound too good but it's quite funny. Oh, and it won't make the tiniest bit of sense if you haven't read the short story, which is here.
Alexander is ‘bout an inch tall;
An inch wide too with
a lollipop in ‘is hand.
Lick-a-lick.
He don’t say much,
but when he do,
It just plain silly
and Sean just thinks:
“What – foo’!”
Alexander’s gone now,
N’ Sean likes to think
he’s free,
But he ain’t – not really,
Jessie got Alexander on
her head now.
Shame on you Sean,
shame on you.
But since humourous poems don't always have so much meaning to them, there should be something else that makes them stand out as good poems. This something else is often a strict rhythm or a rhyme scene. Unlike the previous reader, I think the flow in this was pretty much non-existent. I couldn't identify a rhythm of any kind in this poem, which made it very hard to read and focus on properly. Even if a poem is meant to be funny, you're not allowed to write it haphazardly (I love that word, by the way). There's a saying that goes something like "Humour is one of the most serious things there is". It applies to poetry, as well -- writing a funny poem is serious business. 
