Life is all about you doing and receiving. First of all, yes, you will break your heart. Plenty of times. But you will also break others. You will feel sad, but you will also make others sad. You will both love and hate your life, and others will love and hate you. But at the end of the day, it's not about the ones who hate you. It's not even about the ones who love you. It's all about you, how you want to live, and who you want to be. The most important thing is that you don't spend your life being angry or bitter. Because every moment you do so, you miss one moment of happiness, and that moment, you can never get back.
Hi, Kuhleri. Really cute poem. Surprising at some point ("It's not even about the ones who love you."), and the end were some true, deep, original words. Good job, keep writing and PM me for anything.
I like this poem mainly because it has a very nice flow in it. I don't have to stop and go the the next piece which happen a lot. All I would suggest it to put it into poetic form so it would be easier on the eyes to read and find where one line ends and another begins.
"Tragedy is when I cut my finger, humor is when you cut your finger off."
