When You're Famous

Verse 1:
Will you remember me when you're famous?
Will I be on your mind when fans are screaming out your name?
Will you remember me when you're a superstar?
Will you think of me when you're up there on the stage?

Chorus 1:
Well I'm the girl who told you the truth
Who always had the time
I'm the one always there for you
In pouring rain or sunshine
I'm the one who kept all her promises
Who never gave up on you
I'm the girl who's always been completely in love with you...

Verse 2:
Will you remember me when you're someone?
Will I be on your mind when your face is on everyone's wall?
Will you remember me on that red carpet?
Will you think of me when you've got it all?

Chorus 1:
Well I'm the girl who told you the truth
Who always had the time
I'm the one always there for you
In pouring rain or sunshine
I'm the one who kept all her promises
Who never gave up on you
I'm the girl who's always been completely in love with you...

Verse 3:
Will you remember me when I'm no one?
Even when you're standing out there in the spotlight?
Will you remember me when you've got everything you wanted?
When everything's perfect will you still feel alright?

Chorus 2:
Well I'm the girl keeping secrets
Who'd always admit I was wrong
But now I know I was stupid
For sticking by you for so long
I'm the girl walking away now
Not getting in the way of the superstar
So if it's easier, forget me
But don't forget who you are

I'm the girl in the photograph
The one who always knew
That someday you'd forget me
But I'm still in love with you

this is so cute! I loved it. But you should split this up into verses and choruses because I dont know how this goes. but other than that this was great! Keep Writing!
Nike

I tried to do that haha but it just came out like this

Hey there, Emalily!

Whoa - I just want to say that I really liked this. It has a great idea, and a definite rhythm. Though, I agree - you really should split this up, ex: the chorus, the bridge, etc.

However, these are nice lyrics with definite potential.

-Mizz-

thanks guys

Spiderman Here.

I'm the girl in the photograph
The one who always knew
That someday you'd forget me
But I'm still in love with you

My fave verse. Simple, but fitting or "elegant".
I don't get this chrous verse thing you have setup, but i'm not that much of a poet. You made a good song and don't stop keep writing.

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Awww... This is so adorable! I love it. I like it because it sounds like it comes from deep in your heart and it isn't all mushy gushy and dumb. It has some sadness, but it still sounds like it could be a fun song. Keep it up!

~Grace1096

I love, love, LOVE this!!! I like all the pure, true emotion in it. As I was reading the lyrics to myself, I figured out my own little tune to it, and that's a good thing that I was able to do that with your song here. It's a very relatable subject. One of my friends is the type that will be famous someday, you just know it. He's got all the star quality, and he lights up the stage whenever he's on it performing. The thing is, he thinks really highly of himself, so he's going to be that one celebrity with the humongous ego that nobody really likes him as a person, rather just an actor. I doubt he'll remember me during his Oscar acceptance speech, let alone anyone in our school, or town. The guy's going places, he just needs to remember his roots. Nobody likes the guy who only thinks about himself and how things will benefit him. Anyways, I just told you that story because I feel like your song perfectly describes it. I like everything about it. The only thing I would change, is that you use the word "will" a lot. Change it up, if you can. Reword some lines here and there, use a few synonyms, whatever works. Overall, amazing job here. You're very skilled Keep on writing!

Wow thankyou for the great review!

First off, what an idea (:
Loved the concept of the whole guy becomes superstar type story going on.
I liked the alot of it, but I felt maybe you could of offered a whole lot more;
Not to say what you've written doesn't deserve credit.
Make sure you work a little on the flow in the verses... can get choppy at times.
Nice work ( :

I really liked the song and the story. However, i think the repetition in the verses and the chorus got a little old. Repetitions is fine for repeating "i'm the girl" over and over in the verse or for saying "will you remember me" in the chorus over and over, but having the repetition in both places got slow and almost boring. But i do like the story.