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Chirantha · 2009-12-21T16:27:17Z

HI there. Anyone want their work reviewed? If so, you have come to right place. Can review Action/Adventure, Fanfic, Fantasy, Historical, Romantic, Sci-fic stories Poetry - Any kind, but I'm not that much of a poetry person, okay? But keep in mind that any of these are too serious, as in no one but the author can understand it, I won't be able to review them. Try to review Art/Photography - I know about art and I love it, but I'm not a good review of that. But if brings me up to it, I'll try. Other fiction Cannot review Lyrics Scripts Non-fiction Conditions Please don't overwhelm me with reviews okay? I'll try to review what is given to me, within two days. Cookie per review? Nah..just kiddin. :D Thanks.

Incognito

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Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:42 pm

Incognito says... · Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:42 pm

Hey~
If you are looking for a story to review, I have one. I need a good critique on it, and I saw some of your reviews so I thought to ask. Though it is fairly long and incredibly odd, so if you don't wish to review it, it is no problem.

Here it is:
Tick Tock

~Incognito

'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'

Chirantha

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:36 am

Chirantha says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:36 am

I'll review yours later, Incognito, because I have to go out in about 15 minutes. But I will get back and review it, as soon as I can.

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Chirantha

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Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:23 pm

Chirantha says... · Tue Dec 29, 2009 2:23 pm

All done, Inc. A really great story. Odd, but great.

Anymore?

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Chirantha

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Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:15 pm

Chirantha says... · Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:15 pm

No one? I'm sad again. :smt022

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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OxfordandOnyx

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Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:58 pm

OxfordandOnyx says... · Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:58 pm

Chirantha! I know I'm really annoying but I saw an empty space and thought I may as well ask for another review?

It's another poem (in dramatic poetry)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56319.html

Tis called Find me, and I would like to know what your opinion is?

Thank you!

Four kinds of people I hate most in life.
1. People who use a preposition to end a sentence with.
2. People who can't count.
3. People who think it's 'clever' to quote ironic phrases.

Chirantha

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Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:45 am

Chirantha says... · Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:45 am

Done, Onyx.

Anyone else?

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

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Chirantha

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Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:23 am

Chirantha says... · Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:23 am

No one again?

Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?