Labyrinth

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A truth, a lie

A smile, a cry

Somewhere the sun shines

But not here

No-it's raining

A rain of colour

Confusion

And screams-



Will you let me out

of this stupid maze

A labyrinth of everything

I don't want to face

Cuz I'm not strong

Strong enough to make it

Through one more masked smile...





A laugh, a sigh,

A love slowly dies,

Somewhere the sea is calm

But not here

No- the waves consume

All I thought

I'd ever dream



Will you let me out

of this stupid maze

A labyrinth of everything

I don't want to face

Cuz I'm not strong

Strong enough to make it

Through one more masked smile...



One more smile

Makes a lie

But I'm tired of lying

Tired of dying

So let me out...
Writing: My Anti-Drug




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Hey how's it going

I just wanted to tell you that I really like these lyrics. They're so easy to relate to and so completely true.
Only thing is it was annoying that there were huge gaps between the lines but i think you can fix that easily haha
Anyway, great work
If I die young
bury me in satin
lay me down on a bed of roses
sink me in the river, at dawn
send me away with the words of a love song
<3



A man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest.
— Paul Simon