alone soul

I wake up, get ready, eat my food, and just feel blank. My mind goes on a mission, searching for meaning, but is left empty. I never seem cto be able to find meaning in life. Nobody can help me. I look outside and see a whole world waiting to be discovered. Seeming to lurke in front of me. I strugle to get close to this outside world, but fail. I see laughing children, and happy adults, both with eyes estatic, and joyfull. Why can't I be like them. I feel like an outcast, because I have no such life. Why cant I find such love and compasion like them. I feel so akward, because I am alone and empty. Maybe someday, but not any day soon, I will be like them.

Hi Ariberry. I just wanna point out a few spelling errors in this.

ariberry97 wrote:I wake up, get ready, eat my food, and just feel blank. My mind goes on a mission, searching for meaning, but is left empty. I never seem to be able to find meaning in life. Nobody can help me. I look outside and see a whole world waiting to be discovered. Seeming to lurk in front of me. I struggle to get close to this outside world, but fail. I see laughing children, and happy adults, both with eyes ecstatic, and joyfull. Why can't I be like them. I feel like an outcast, because I have no such life. Why can't I find such love and compassion like them. I feel so awkward, because I am alone and empty. Maybe someday, but not any day soon, I will be like them.

OK. Overall, I found this really... Blah. The narration was a tad boring. Not to be rude. Maybe some touching up with the spelling and adding some more emotion.

I really like this poem i can really relate to this sometimes i feel the same this was Awsome