Love Poem

1 + 1 = 1

I think it's a little simple..it's a great emotional thought..like in that small equation we can feel your lonliness; but maybe if that were the title and you wrote a little. I do like it at that but I'd like more just my suggestion

Is this suppose to be a poem or you just need a help from a math problem?

By reading that one and only line, I could not tell if the audience was supposed to see this as an incorrect math problem, or a cold and lonely one-liner.

~Lindsay
"It is not the mountain we conquer but ourselves." ~Edmund Hillary

Philosophical! Are you trying to tell us that, even when you add another person to your life, you still feel alone?

I actually laughed when I saw it.

~Roon

Thanks for the comments I'll keep them in mind.

Well first of all, I wouldn't really call it a poem, but an interesting thought.
Second.. it's totally ambiguous.

It can be that two people never stay together, and eventually you're always left by yourself. I can be that two people come together so completely that they become almost a single entity. It can be that you always feel alone, no matter who you're with. This is, obviously, without the explanation of the writer above. c:

Nice thought.

-Coral

Yuriiko wrote:Is this suppose to be a poem or you just need a help from a math problem?

HAHA. I had to laugh at this. Yeah, you have a point.

Well, like what others said, this may or may not be a poem.
But I DO love the meaning underlying this line.

I think what you meant here was,
me + you = (like) as one. (or you two become one) HAHA.
Sorry, I don't know how to express this better.

Keep writing, though.

-KAT <3