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chazzer
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Sun May 16, 2010 1:05 pm
chazzer says... · Sun May 16, 2010 1:05 pm
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Last edited by chazzer on Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:02 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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ArahniaSiddel
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Mon May 17, 2010 3:23 pm
ArahniaSiddel says... · Mon May 17, 2010 3:23 pm
ummmmmm . . . . I can't really comment on the poem. But, what you said before the poem was awful. Please use complete words. :) Thankyou
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Blift
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Mon May 17, 2010 4:37 pm
Blift says... · Mon May 17, 2010 4:37 pm
Well, the poem was quite bland, but I am not jealous. I didn't really understand it but...

And I won't be a lying cheat

because my heart skips to a different beat.


I think that's the best line, even thought it doesn't make sense
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so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
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